“If they don’t see us they will know we are here when the electric is cut. Are you ready?”
Rose and Merl nodded. Rose was carrying wood-handled clippers. Merl had three saddle blankets. I was carrying a length of knotted rope tied to a heavy anchor.
I gave the hand signal and we rushed the fence. Rose knew the exact wires to clip. Merl threw the blankets onto the top of the fence to cover the barbs. I tossed the anchor over.
Swinging my legs over the top they got snagged on the barbs. I heard the choppers coming.
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